Posted by Nalin Mehra on 5:56 PM



Hi My Blog Readers,
Since the day i saw "Ghajini" of Aamir Khan, there was one shayri which just occupied my mind, to me it was like incomplete composition just like the incomplete romance of Sanjay Singhania of "Ghajini" and it was poking my creative mind continuosly. so i thought to complete this "Shayri" and here's what I wrote... Please have a look at it and let me know your reactions & comments on this attempt of mine

The Original Ghajini Shayari
"बस एक हाँ के इंतज़ार में रात यूँ ही गुज़र जायेगी,
अब तोः बस उलझन है साथ मेरे नींद कहाँ आएगी,
सुबह की किरण जाने कोनसा संदेश लाएगी,
रिमझिम सी गुनगुनायेगी या प्यास अधूरी रह जायेगी......"

Original Roman Hindi Version
"bas ab ek haan ke intezaar me raat yunhi guzar jaayegi,
ab toh bas uljhan hai saath mere neend kahan aayegi,
Subah ki kiran na jaane konsa sandesh laayegi,
rimjhim is gungunayegi ya pyaas adhuri reh jaayegi"










NOW................. MY VERSION OF THE POEM.....(FULL VERSION)

बस एक हाँ के इंतज़ार में रात यूँ ही गुज़र जायेगी,
अब तोः बस उलझन है साथ मेरे नींद कहाँ आएगी,
सुबह की किरण जाने कोनसा संदेश लाएगी,
रिमझिम सी गुनगुनायेगी या प्यास अधूरी रह जायेगी

अब तोः बस सारी रात उसकी यादें आएगी,
हर गुज़रते पल में उसकी बातें आएगी,
उसकी शरारतें मेरे चेहरे मुस्कराहट लाएगी,
मेरी आँखें उसकी झील सी आंखों में डूब जायेगी,

उसकी बातें किसी मीठी धुन की तरह कानो में घुल जायेगी,
उसकी मासूम हँसी सुकूं की तरह दिल में उतर जायेगी,
मेरी साँसों में वो बनके खुशबु बस जायेगी,
मेरी नींद में भी ख्वाब बनके वो आएगी,

जो आया मोहोब्बत का पैगाम तोः यह ज़िन्दगी संवर जायेगी,
ज़िन्दगी के इस सफर को एक मंजिल मिल जायेगी,
अगर हुई रुसवाई तोः ज़िन्दगी कुछ ऐसी हो जायेगी,
जिंदा रहूँगा में पर ज़िन्दगी ख़तम हो जायेगी,

अब तोः खुदा जाने या मेरा साजन की मेरी मोहोब्बत क्या रंग लाएगी,
है उम्मीद की चाँद सितारों सी आसमान में मुकम्मल हो जायेगी,
जो हुई सच्ची तोः मोहोब्बत मेरी कुछ ऐसा असर कर जायेगी,
मेरी प्यार भरी "गुजारिशें" उन्हें कुबूल हो जायेगी.........

- नलिन


Roman Hindi Version of The Poem

bas ab ek haan ke intezaar me raat yunhi guzar jaayegi,
ab toh bas uljhan hai saath mere neend kahan aayegi,
Subah ki kiran na jaane konsa sandesh laayegi,
rimjhim is gungunayegi ya pyaas adhuri reh jaayegi

ab toh bas saari raat uski yaadein aayegi,
har guzarte pal me uski hi baatein aayegi,
uski shararatein mere chehre pe muskurahat laayegi,
meri aankhein uski jheel si aankhon me doob jaayegi

uski baatein kisi meethi dhun ki tarah kano me ghul jaayegi,
uski masoom si hansi sukun ki tarah dil me utar jaayegi,
mere sanson me woh banke khushbu bas jaayegi,
meri neend me bhi khwab banke woh aayegi

jo aaya mohobbat ka paigam to yeh zindagi sawar jaayegi,
zindagi ke is safar ko ek manzil mil jaayegi,
agar hui ruswai toh zindagi kuch aisi ho jayegi,
zinda rahunga me par zindagi khatam ho jaayegi,

ab toh khuda jaane ya mera sajan ki meri mohobbat kya rang layegi,
Hai ummed ke Chand aur sitaaron si aasman me mukammal ho jaayegi,
jo hui sacchi to mohobbat meri kuch aisa asar kar jaayegi,
Meri Pyar bhari "guzarishein" unhe kubool ho jaayegi........

Nalin The Lost Poet..

Posted by Nalin Mehra on 11:35 AM

It was one fine sunday evening, i was just messing up with my computer and suddenly a ping sound scared the hell out of me, it was gtalks mesg buzz. It was frm my friend, he got a girl & was planning to get engaged & was looking for some astro prediction. I dnt want to come across as some 'BABAJI' with face full of beard, astrology is just my hobby. Anyways he got answers to his question, but my weirdo mind got me trapped in 'saath phere' & 'shaadi'. My better half (my weirdo mind) asked me why is marriage neccesary? As people infected by bollywood fever say, " yeh do dilon ka sangam hai", i had a confusing stand on this but before i would hv reached to any conclusion, my phone beeped & it showed a SMS which concluded my thoughts & my weirdo mind got d answer. The SMS stated,"Every man should get married some time; after all, happiness is not the only thing in life!! "

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